These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this and what are the solutions?
A generation ago, teaching was a respectable and prestigious job, and that is still true in some regions and countries. Unfortunately, recently, the number of young people wanting to pursue the career of teaching has decreased drastically. In this essay, I will discuss some causes to this problem and propose some solutions to them.
One of the main drawbacks of being a teacher is low salary. Comparing to other careers in laws or medicines, teaching is definitely not a lucrative job. Some graduates say that, with the same degree in mathematics for example, they can earn twice or even three times more than being teachers if they work in marketing or accounting. An obvious solution for the government is to raise teachers' pay significantly in order to attract more people in to the profession.
Another cause to their teacher shortages is students' bad behaviour at schools. Teachers have to deal with students disobeying and being rude to them almost every day, and it can be stressful. This can even intensify to the point some teachers have to sadly, quit teaching. To tackle this complicated issue, parents must educate their children properly so that they are well-mannered respect the teachers at school.
Furthermore, the work burden on the teachers is undeniable. Not only they are constantly snowed under paper work, they have to pay close attention to their students' physical health, mental health, behaviours, etc. to offer proper consultations and orientation. The way forward might be to employ more teaching assistant labors to reduce the burden and help teachers balance their work and personal life more easily.
To sum up, teaching is a demanding job. A good teacher does not just provide students with proper academic knowledge, he or she also has to be able to inspire and motivate his or her students to do better in life. To be capable of doing so, teachers need to be more well-paid, well-respected and well-assisted. Once society provided them with such things, young people would certainly be more interested in being a teacher in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...t, with the same degree in mathematics. they can ears twice or even three times more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, well, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85614737972 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579411764706 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.154272971 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116210820122 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378819842243 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348105690702 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697121764415 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296240818998 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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