You recently left something at the bus station. Write a letter to the manager of the bus station.
In the letter
- Describe what you left
- When and where you left it
- Ask some questions about how you can get it back.
Dear Sir,
I am write this letter because I left my bag at the Brampton bus station on Friday evening at 7pm as I am in hurry.
This bag is small and brown color. It is looking like a suitcase and you can see the right side is little damaged. It got a handle and sticker with my name card. This is important bag for me as I keep some office papers inside. So, please help me.
On Friday, I am returning from work and was at Brampton station from 6- 7 pm on 16th July 2021. My bag left in the bay area near the red and blue seats on that day.
I can come any time to picked up my bag. Also what ID you need to return my bag, I will bring it with me. Please call me on 647-111-1111 if you found my bag please.
Thank you and please call me.
Your’s sincerely,
H. P. Boti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
Dear Sir, I am write this letter because I left my bag at th...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... can come any time to picked up my bag. Also what ID you need to return my bag, I wi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Your' or 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Your; Yours
...please. Thank you and please call me. Your’s sincerely, H. P. Boti
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 621.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.88125 4.54256449028 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00833225277 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64375 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.41237113402 78% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4109829343 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 47.7692307692 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3076923077 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21342215252 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656119096111 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643662292412 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12730765715 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527945896048 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.0 8.37731958763 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 101.59 70.7449484536 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.1 7.45979381443 28% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.34 8.71597938144 50% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.81 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 3.0 8.15463917526 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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