Some people believe that many things that students are taught in school are waste of time, while other believe that sometimes these things are important. Discuss both views.
Undoubtally, no one can abnegate the role of schools as it has great influence over the students. However, there is a belief an argument in the society that various things which are taught in institutions are wastage of time, but others hold the opposite notion, Here by , i an going to shed light on both views in the following passages.
On the face of statement, there are multiple factors to support that the various activities which children learn in schools are wastage of time. The foremost reason is that subjects such as art, music, game and exectra are considered to be waste of time .since it will not enhance the knowledge of student , they will only focus on extra curricular activities. Another factor that attracts is that they will not learn other subjects like science, history, geography, physics consequently , owing to lack of knowledge they will struggle in life. Scholars not only face difficulty to get jobs but also struggle for getting success. The reason is they had not performed well in academic. The several studies had shown the teenagers who had not focused on studies they had faced poverty in extreme levels.
On the contrary, the later view suggest that plethora of things which kids acess in schools like singing, dancing, judo, swimming, sports these are highly beneficial for physical and mental health. Although it boost the stamina also reduce the obesity. Be sides this, these subjects improve the social as well as cognitive skills.
To summarise and give my opinion, I would say that theoretical knowledge and sports both are equally important . These subjects should compulsory in schools is the most ideal way to deal with this situation. In a big picture, this would help students to get success in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, well, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99658703072 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5338618673 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9475961629 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168577476561 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472103283721 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464694992835 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10302391683 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378938320518 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.