Some people think women should play an equal role in the police and military while others think women are less suitable for these roles.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the meantime, the wave of feminism is being strongly stimulated. Saying because there is gender equality, some people believe that women should play the same role as men in the police and military. Even though this statement is discussed heatedly every day, I strongly believe that women are more suitable for their own roles at first.
First, not all women are suitable for being in the police and military. These roles require high physical strength. To take part in these fields, a person also needs sacrifice, braveness, and body flexibility, which usually can be found in a man. In most situations, women are being claimed to be weaker than men. They have a smaller body and are hard to gain muscles. Getting trained to be in the police or military, a person has to go through strict health censorship. Because of that, not every woman can pass that test. Being the physically weaker gender, women will have to face a lot of disadvantages if they follow these paths.
Secondly, women are doing great at their job. We all know that the strength of a woman is usually about the mind. They have a creative mindset, high emotional intelligence, and sentimental soul. A girl can get their development in her mind better than a boy. No wonder why the proportion of women novelists are getting higher and higher each year. For example, J.K. Rowling is a particular “rags to riches life”. She is the author of the famous novel series “Harry Potter”. She not only has already finished completely her first mission: giving birth and taking care of her child but also being recognized as the world’s first billionaire author by Forbes.
In conclusion, there is no limitation for a woman’s strength. It is undeniable that today, women are becoming stronger and stronger than before. They can totally choose to join the police or military if they are able. There is no forcing. Women always know how to use their strength to get successful and balance the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87278106509 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55240409023 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3452957344 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.625 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.20833333333 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210749085447 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553048769414 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677021808004 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137685556273 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758908590782 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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