If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The speaker asserts that as long as goals is worthy, any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Indeed, stopping at nothing to get anything can help us fulfill some purposes. However, if the means taken to attain are extreme, it has negative influence on society and individuals. In my point of view, I strongly disagree with the speaker.
To begin with, in the economic fields, any means taken to attain it will cause economic recession. It is common that companies want to earn more profit, but if they do not stop at nothing to get what they want, they will cause social conflicts and economic disorder. Unfair competition can be an example. Since unfair competition cause economic injury to a business through deceptive or wrong business practices, it will lead to economic disorder. In sum, stopping at nothing to get anything will harm the economy.
Secondly, in the political area, stopping at nothing to get anything will induce political disorder. To many politicians, becoming a president is their final goal. However, if they stop at nothing to get what they want in order to be a president, they will cause social disorder. Africa conflict is an example. For own interest, Africa’s leaders star many wars in Africa without minding victims. In a word, in the political area, if leaders stop at nothing to get what they want, it will lead to social disorder.
Finally, in the entertainment fields, any means taken to attain it will result unfair competition. To actors, wanting to be famous is reasonable, but if they stop at nothing to obtain what they want, it may cause improper things to happen. Unspoken rules in Korea can be an illustration. In Korea, because many actresses want to be famous, they stop at nothing to receive what they want; And in order to get opportunity of plays, they slept with director. As a result, many actresses commit a suicide, since they are unbearable. In brief, if people stop at nothing to get what they want, it is necessary to happen some improper things, even impairing themselves.
To sum up, in economic, political, and entertainment fields, the things that any means taken to attain it will cause a negative effect on society and individuals. Therefore, I totally disagree with what the speaker says.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...is worthy, any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Indeed, stopping at nothin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in brief, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.921875 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70801280155 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424479166667 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 16.0 4.38483146067 365% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0780901258 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1739130435 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6956521739 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 5.13820224719 331% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0695952995546 0.243740707755 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328606616815 0.0831039109588 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466984068977 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650647841468 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480475035294 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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