You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to you friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should:
- Say what you enjoyed about the dinner
- Describe how you feel about his/her family
- Invite your friend and his/her family to you place.
Dear Jini,
I am fine and hope that you are doing well. It has been just a week that we have met but it feels like a year. I am writing to thank you for having me at your place and can't express how much I have enjoyed it.
It's really thoughtful of Aunt Lucy to have remembered my favourite cuisine. I have never ever had such a palatable home cooked chinese food in my life. I am so thankful to her for putting so much effort and time into cooking delicious garlic chicken and fried rice along with the spring rolls, for me. I loved it so much.
I want to tell you that your family gave me so much warmth and love, that it actually reminded me of my parents back in Punjab. Initially I was feeling a bit shy, but then your mom and dad made me very comfortable by cracking jokes with me. Your dad certainly has a great sense of humor and I had an exhilarating experience which I am going to cherish for years to come.
Why don't we catch up on Sunday at my place? My family will be glad to meet you.
Keep in touch and see you soon.
Best regards
Ishween kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jini, I am fine and hope that you are doing we...
^^^
Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ank you for having me at your place and cant express how much I have enjoyed it. I...
^^^^
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce along with the spring rolls, for me. I loved it so much. I want to tell you ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng rolls, for me. I loved it so much. I want to tell you that your family gave ...
^
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing a bit shy, but then your mom and dad made me very comfortable by cracking jok...
^^
Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oing to cherish for years to come. Why dont we catch up on Sunday at my place? My f...
^^^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in touch and see you soon. Best regards Ishween kaur
^^^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you soon. Best regards Ishween kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06161137441 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13408064934 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658767772512 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9769098744 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2142857143 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203363233499 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679235384846 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636522468 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120809130188 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580769714633 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.