The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
I strongly agree with the claim that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. This is important because leadership is the virtue of those who know how to work in a team and manage the team and its progress. For example, when an employee faces difficulty in one of the tasks assigned, it can be resolved if the coworkers or the team lead assists the employee in resolving the issue. Thus, to be a leader, it is very important to understand how to work in a team where everyone contributes to the same cause i.e., the success of the team and not against one other like in a competition.
It is important to understand that a sense of cooperation and collaboration promotes teamwork which makes the tasks easier. This is because when a group of people work together on an assigned task newer ideas and perspectives are discussed which helps in the simplification of tasks. It also helps in meeting the deadlines well within time. An added advantage is the division of workload and stress among all the team members. For instance, a huge task will be better performed if it is divided, discussed and worked on by multiple employees rather than a single employee who might collapse under the pressure of the task. Hence, working in a team helps in simplifying the tasks and producing better and efficient results.
A sense of competition imbibed brings a lot of collateral damage with it as well. It not only promotes unhealthy emotions like jealousy or competitiveness in employees but also develops a quality of selfishness. Every employee is focused on individual progress and does not think about the growth of the company on the whole. In extreme cases, it could also lead to mishandling of documents or other losses. Thus, it is very important to demote the idea of competition and encourage healthy collaboration between employees.
It is therefore very important for youngsters to imbibe the quality of cooperation early on in order to become better and successful leaders in the future. If the importance of collaboration and teamwork is understood when young, it could lead to splendid results in the future and certainly contribute to the progress of the nation.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88549618321 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93471492927 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488549618321 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5385307785 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.941176471 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249530946245 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725268091585 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147497795975 0.0758088955206 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13366998499 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10660099809 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.