The film is a less important form of arts than literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
According to the statement, the form of arts to depict via movies or films predicted to be less valuable in comparison to literature and paintings.It seems to me as both plays vital role on their particular manner and couple of view points are explained in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with,on the side of films, which represents the superior way of arts in modern manner.This shows their own importance similar to literature and paintings.Because, there are plethora of reasons which favours that point. The first and foremost factor is advancement in technology.In modern decade, innovations become spread rapidly and this improves the way of representation of movies. For instance, there are plenty of art movies which come in front of public and become too popular due to the satisfying and most interesting facts such as colour animation, 3D creatures and so on.Due to this, individuals find the more enjoyable and easy way to understand the internal idea of art.Moreover, in this criteria, the hard work of producer could not be neglected who represents the art via animation and with superior way.As a result, the movies become go in cinemas and big theaters due to which they recieve handsome wages via tickets which becomes positive for the economy of nation.
On controversy, literature and paintings represent their own dominant role.Because, these form of arts depict the picture of history.In this criteria, art is compelled by ancient artists in the form of drawing, painting and so on which also shows the keen image of the personal experience of artist.Due to this, the way of representation become inline with information of medieval decade.Because, there literatures usually depicts the historical events and culture of nation which is preserved in the method of these art forms.Apart from that, these ways of arts have their such popularity rather than films.Because, there are such paintings which illustrates about the lifestyle of ancient masses.For instance, nowadays, archeologists find numerous caves and rocks which represents the image of ancient decades which are drawn by those masses.Due to this, present homo sapiens become able to get knowledge and informative skills regarding their ancestors.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that both films and literature, paintings so on display their importance in numerous ways.Because, films are modern way to show the arts however, literature and paintings are attached with the ancient culture and history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38265306122 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06560910484 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 278.685455906 49.4020404114 564% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 351.666666667 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.3333333333 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.6666666667 7.06120827912 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176577237289 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100299952328 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677697996972 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134905366609 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509257792046 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.6 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 50.2224549098 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.45 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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