Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Several supporters have considered that the advertisement should be entirely banned. Personally, I think it is absolutely an appalling idea which not only lessens people's welfare but also imperils the global economy.
There are certainly negative economic aspects of totally banning all advertisements. On the one hand, if a company can not advertise its products which will decrease its exposure rate and turn markets into a monopoly. For example, although an obscure company has superb products, it still can not surpass a time-honored brand because no one knows them. On the other hand, presently many companies provide various free platforms for people because of adequately advertising funds. Such as two prominent platforms Google and Facebook, they make the best use of advertising funds to provide high-quality videos and free searching systems for people.
Furthermore, banning advertising is undoubtedly disrupts people's well-being even though their health. First, it will restrict people to obtain diverse information. Moreover, as progressive technology which can let customers acquire more accurate advertisement. Therefore, without advertising customers will unable to shop around breezily. Second, since advertising usually appears between TV programs every thirty minutes which seems very annoyed; however, doctors always suggest having brief rest time when continuously elevated eyes pressure. Thus, even if people were not interested in advertising, they are still compelled to have time to rest which is beneficial to our health.
In conclusion, we can not ignore the significance of advertising, it is still a vital catalyst for growth in the modern world. Advertisements should be constrained but not eliminated utterly.
- In many countries people now wear western style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing Why is this Is this a positive or negative development 84
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places At the same time there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70106761566 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02157655863 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683274021352 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4301268327 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2352941176 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34334187155 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117831143734 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15960209048 0.0667982634062 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246382460087 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200137548814 0.056905535591 352% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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