Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.
Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
In recent years, many people toil for overtime work, leading to compress leisure time. Undoubtedly, both pros and cons of working long hours are involved. Nevertheless, I believed that there are more disadvantages than advantages.
There are certainly positive aspects of working long hours. The key benefits for people is increasing their earning, it is commonly known that prolonged working is not only associated with a higher salary but also raise the company productivity. Therefore, people can achieve their material satisfaction. Furthermore, in this capitalist society, an abundance of wealth is also related to higher social status which will have more power to dominate or manage in company.
However, people always underestimated the working long hours drawbacks. One severe issue of extensive working hours is health problem, because of insufficient exercise, recent research indicates that people with sedentary are more likely at greater risk of cardiovascular disease and obesity. For this reason, they can not trace back to good health even they have time and money to spend. Moreover, in order to work for a long time, people need to sacrifice social activity and family time, in the long term they will find that their relationship between both friends and family seems to be increasingly distant even generated social phobia.
In conclusion, there is no denying that there are some benefits on working long hours, but it seems that the disadvantages is more crucial than advantages. From my perspective, nothing is as important as health, we should keep in balance between health, relationships, and working hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42578125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87890094979 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7897779341 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367629674486 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124813705139 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544457560879 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222863350276 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824457465017 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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