Parents have an essential influence on their kids' emotional and psychological behavior. Father and mother should spend enough time with their kids. Controversial question is which is better, spend spare time with children by doing schoolwork or having fun? This can be weight in many aspects.
admittedly, some people believe, parents and their kids should have fun and play together when their is chance to have enough time. Moreover, they are both need to relax and ventilate their pressure from hard week work. but, in my perspective, if I have enough time, I would like to spend that time with my kids by helping them doing their school homework, or, explain to them any subject that they are struggling with. In the following essay, I will share my reason to explain my point of view.
The important reason is, we can help our kids to improve their academic achievement and getting high scores which will help them to finish their study with a good GP, Moreover, they can attend a suitable college in the future. it is very important when parents take care of kids' education and try to make them focus on their study by monitoring their classes and help them to ingest subjects. Take my experience as a compelling example, I used to ask my daughter about her classes and always try to teach her especially math. As a result, she became very smart and she took advance classes in math. As a conclusion, spend time with our kids by teaching them will improve their commitments.
In addition, other important reason springs to my mind, by doing so this will strength the bond between parents and their young kids, they give both of them opportunity to be close to each other, because this will give them chance to spend long time closely and strong their relation ship. Furthermore, kids will feel how their parents pay attention to their education. Also, they will be aware about the importance of education to build a good future career.
To sum up, I strongly believe that , when parents have time, they should use that time in doing some things together with their kids that related to their school duties like help them in doing homework or explain any subject that kid struggling with to develop their performance and to strong the bond between parents and their children.
Parents have an essential influence on their kids' emotional and psychological behavior. Father and mother should spend enough time with their kids. Controversial question is which is better, spend spare time with children by doing schoolwork or having fun? This can be weight in many aspects.
admittedly, some people believe, parents and their kids should have fun and play together when their is chance to have enough time. Moreover, they are both need to relax and ventilate their pressure from hard week work. but, in my perspective, if I have enough time, I would like to spend that time with my kids by helping them doing their school homework, or, explain to them any subject that they are struggling with. In the following essay, I will share my reason to explain my point of view.
The important reason is, we can help our kids to improve their academic achievement and getting high scores which will help them to finish their study with a good GP, Moreover, they can attend a suitable college in the future. it is very important when parents take care of kids' education and try to make them focus on their study by monitoring their classes and help them to ingest subjects. Take my experience as a compelling example, I used to ask my daughter about her classes and always try to teach her especially math. As a result, she became very smart and she took advance classes in math. As a conclusion, spend time with our kids by teaching them will improve their commitments.
In addition, other important reason springs to my mind, by doing so this will strength the bond between parents and their young kids, they give both of them opportunity to be close to each other, because this will give them chance to spend long time closely and strong their relation ship. Furthermore, kids will feel how their parents pay attention to their education. Also, they will be aware about the importance of education to build a good future career.
To sum up, I strongly believe that , when parents have time, they should use that time in doing some things together with their kids that related to their school duties like help them in doing homework or explain any subject that kid struggling with to develop their performance and to strong the bond between parents and their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79746835443 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40907899749 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486075949367 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.8973532575 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.470588235 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512898292058 0.236089414692 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200034891792 0.076458572812 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18905287917 0.0737576698707 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374035955053 0.150856017488 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.246123960731 0.0645574589148 381% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.