Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age this is called peer pressure do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages
It is indisputable that the youth has a propensity to follow others, especially their mate whose attitudes influence them a lot. It has an impact both positively and negatively in their daily life. In the following paragraphs, both pros, and cons will be discussed and finally, my opinion will be given.
To begin with the benefits, firstly, interacting with friends who have a good sentiment helps others to change their outlook and diverted them to the positive side. Moreover, it develops their morality and also assists them to make a decision correctly. Secondly, in the case of study, a boy or girl can inspire another gender to study hard which will be beneficial to improve their grade. For instance, a student who has achieved high marks in the class can easily catch the eye of others of his or her study style such as note-taking in the class and how he or she studies. Thirdly, encourage doing social activities such as teaching illiterate people. For instance, at Khulna University, a few pupils started a club to teach poor students, by inspiring from their effort many students joined this club and help to decrease the illiteracy rate in society.
Despite being having many advantages, following others, have some limitations too. To begin with drug-addicted, in contemporary times, it is a growing concern among parents all around the world. Most of the time children spend with their friends in school, college, and university, as a good friend can help to be a good human and a bad company encourages taking drugs which can spoil their life. A drug-addicted people always fall into frustration and life becomes exhausted for them. In addition, because of having a negative association sometimes they do some criminal activities like robbery, snatching, and so on.
In conclusion, to sum up all the points above, if anyone chooses a well-manner mate who has all good qualities then drawbacks can not cross the barrier of benefits or otherwise opposites can happen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01812688822 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78748348249 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622356495468 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.485840138 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7333333333 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090911677453 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030494729816 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212213706887 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477689892488 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308324579874 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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