In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything they want if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
It is irrefutable that children are the torch bearers of the future.
Children are often told that nothing is impossible to be achieved by them if they put enough effort to do anything.
This nothing has its own advantages and disadvantages.
So this essay shall intend to discuss both the negatives and positives of this belief.
On the brighter side, It is well said that If children and younger generation are have enough motivation they can do anything no matter whether it is hard or easy. So, it's the duty of mature ones to motivate them as this can be helpful in many fields, as children can come up with new ideas and inventions if they are confident about what they're doing, The same goes for academic field where some children and students lack motivation so, there's need of motivation which is often provided by their parents.
For example- Children sometimes have a lot of talent but they hesitate to use it because they are usually anxious about failure.So, if their parents provide them with motivation and confidence they can actually achieve things which can earn them a great recognition.So, It is important to supply them necessary confidence via motivational messages.
On the darker side, This message has some disadvantages too. As, such messages can result into overconfidence which is believed to be a bad thing. Further, Supplying children with such messages can also motivate them to indulge into activities which are really risk and have harmful outcomes, to examplify this- Extreme sports are activities which are not suitable for children but still some children get involved in them due to the overconfidence they get from those messages, Hence, It is often forgotten to take risk factor into account, Furthermore, There have been many incidents where overconfidence resulted in children talking part into activities like driving a motorcycle and end up falling which can cause many injuries.
To conclude, It would be reasonable to say that these type of messages can help children to accomplish great achivements if they're being motivated to perform activities which are suitable for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... If children and younger generation are have enough motivation they can do anything ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... matter whether it is hard or easy. So, its the duty of mature ones to motivate the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...ntions if they are confident about what theyre doing, The same goes for academic field...
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Suggestion: there's
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, really, so, still, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11461318052 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79318340748 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54441260745 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.284303197 49.4020404114 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.272727273 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7272727273 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364558958213 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150581395549 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777224148788 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162034035136 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900351565174 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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