During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
In your letter,
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Peter,
I am Mitul Gandhi, currently working in Five star restaurant, New Delhi as a Chef. This is reference to oour last week discussion in flight, I am writing this letter to apply for a job in your Mumbai restaurant.
I hope you still remember that on last week, we met in Jet Airways flight, flying from New Delhi to Mumbai city and my seat was beside you. It was really my pleasure to get acquainted with the person of same Industry. During discussion, I came to know that you own a plethora of restaurants in various cities and you had advised to connect for possible job available in your restaurant. I would like to apply for Chief Chef role at your Mumbai based multi cuisine restaurant.
It has been total 10 years of experience as a chef with my present employer and I am well versed with cooking of Italian, Mexican and Chinese dishes which is speciality of your eatery. In addition to this, I have been awarded as best chef at pan India level competition. Therefore, looking at my exposure in same industry for 10 years and acquainted with various taste of dishes, I feel I will be able to justify this position given an opportunity.
I hope you will consider my profile and will consider me for this post. In anticipation for your positive reply.
With kind regards,
Mitul Gandhi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Peter, I am Mitul Gandhi, currently working in ...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'restaurants'.
Suggestion: restaurants
... Gandhi, currently working in Five star restaurant, New Delhi as a Chef. This is reference...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ply. With kind regards, Mitul Gandhi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, still, therefore, well, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62553191489 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59838024554 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3211555916 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137477005274 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506714902815 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797507136339 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845993714348 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080192990112 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.