University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Tuition fees continue to be controversial, with some people claiming that it is indeed free for students in universities. However, I personally do not totally agree with this, and I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, universities based on the tuition fee from students to improve the infrastructure and facilities as well as salary for teachers. If the plan of free education is implemented, it will be hard for universities to operate their normal educational activities, which may result in the closure of many universities. This school also needs the subsidize to provide modern facilities, which the expenditure from the government is not enough. This contributed to the teacher’s satisfaction and learning environment. Secondly, tuition-free creates motivation for students. When learners pay stable money for classes, they have to study hard to make up for their expenses. If all the courses are free, this leads to procrastination from the students. It means that they are prone to care about other instant pleasure and believe that they can student whenever they want.
However, there are some students with difficult circumstances can not pay for tuition fee, lead to the fact that some of them miss further education after graduating high school. Therefore, is necessary for universities to free learners in these cases to help them overcome the barriers of family difficulties. Furthermore, making this type of education free means they can put all the effort and concentration into studying without worry about the cost of education. Consequently, students can reach their academic ambitions and contribute their talents to the country’s development.
In conclusion, I believe that it seems logical to free the cost of education for learners in difficult conditions, not for all the students. This can help the university to pay the salary for teachers and other facilities as well as contribute to student’s motivation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ny universities. This school also needs the subsidize to provide modern facilities, which the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3954248366 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14132531423 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1668127538 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125297193165 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046712830973 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436139881258 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893292395036 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139401664867 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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