Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Discuss advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays many big companies and industries are located faraway from the cities. considering that some people believe rural areas are good option for large companies and factories rather than huge populated areas. This essay will discuss the both benefits and
drawbacks of the above arguments with relevant examples and supporting points.
first of all, large companies and industries require a plenty amount of space for its operations. The urban zones have limited available space and the rental cost for land is high but in regional areas where land availability good and cost for lease relatively low compared to cities.
additionally, harmful gases that are emitted from industries will not cause any health issues for the people because of its location not nearer to the urban zones. a recent survey conducted by environmental students from oxford university stated that governments in developed
countries issue flexible conditions for factories and large company owners to move to regional locations for the pollution free environment.
on the other hand , The people need to travel long distances inorder to reach the work places .This causes additional travelling cost and people get exhausted of travelling for long hours. furthermore , seperate executive offices are to be maintained in urban areas for meetings and other operations.
In conclusion , the relocation of factories and large companies to rural areas benefit both the owners of the companies aswell as general public,even though they are far away from urban zones where travelling long distance is involved and further office buildings needed to built in urban areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, so, well, as for, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48559670782 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70558656472 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61316872428 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3760253561 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.111111111 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333992121817 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129363039428 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608056932757 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14530687468 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771201460113 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Considering
...es are located faraway from the cities. considering that some people believe rural areas ar...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...essay will discuss the both benefits and drawbacks of the above arguments with re...
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...ant examples and supporting points. first of all, large companies and industries...
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...s. first of all, large companies and industries require a plenty amount of sp...
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...n zones have limited available space and the rental cost for land is high but in ...
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...ase relatively low compared to cities. additionally, harmful gasses that are emitted from i...
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...rom industries will not cause any health issues for the people because of its loc...
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...location not nearer to the urban zones. a recent survey conducted by environmenta...
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...for the pollution free environment. on the other hand , The people need to tra...
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... free environment. on the other hand , The people need to travel long distance...
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...f travelling for long hours. furthermore , seperate executive offices are to be ma...
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Suggestion: public
...h the owners of the companies aswell as general public,even though they are far away from urba...
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Line 10, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , even
...f the companies aswell as general public,even though they are far away from urban zon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, so, well, as for, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48559670782 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70558656472 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61316872428 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3760253561 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.111111111 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333992121817 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129363039428 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608056932757 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14530687468 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771201460113 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.