Some people think that the space exploration is a waste of resources while other think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live.
Discuss the both sides and give your opinion
Society is always divided in their opinions.A section of people believe that traveling in space is misspent of time and money, while another group of community thinks that it is all worthy to wonder in place humankind exists. This essay shall discuss both the aspects in following paragraphs.
First and foremost, exploring space is compelling venture for number of people. In spite of living unimtersting life they prefer to do something unique and it gives them feeling of satisfaction. Moreover, travelling through space gives intriguing informations which is derived from other planets and also find out about existence of other species weather they have unique properties towards their civilization or having different characteristics for livehood. In addition, advancement of space technology allows nation to set various satellites In order to obtain statistics and it is conveniently useful in particular fields.
On the other hand, this technology is not cheaper as many people believe. It cost great deal of fuel and human effort too. For an instance many developing countries still can not afford own satellites and space program because of heavy cost behind that. Eventhough, investing all the resources sometimes it has chance to fail to reach in space and them it would b waste of all hard work and resources. Perhaps that's the reason behind individual mindset rather than spending resources on space tour one nation can significantly increase basic infrastructure of their country and provide better way of living to mankind.
In my opinion, undoubtedly, there are some drewvacks of this trend but at the same time it has multifold benefits so that I agree with that notion of travelling space .
To encapsulate, by looking at both two points it is Clea that humans should try to invest or exploration of outer place as it has plethora of benefits to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, in particular, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21710526316 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86205283184 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641447368421 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.065609861 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258445998903 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708738593407 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350731012619 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110046640653 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326482884922 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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