Men and women are capable of doing all jobs equally well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Males and females are considered for many jobs without any type of discrimination these days. Both genders have the ability to perform all the jobs with the same level of performance. I partially agree with the assertion as it is quite hard for women to do menial jobs, especially in the construction field.
First and foremost, groundbreaking technologies have eliminated the difference in gender discrimination so far. Most jobs have become quite convenient with the help of computer and mechanical robotic technologies. As a result, men and women both can equally qualify for jobs if they have the required knowledge and skills. Audit firms, software houses, IT and service industries, for instance, are computerized based sectors that require the right candidates with the right expertise which can be possessed by men or women as no menial efforts are required in such jobs. However, labor jobs can be difficult for women as it requires a lot of physical efforts which men can handle well as compared to women.
Conversely, most of the men are strong enough for menial jobs and have more stamina to work for long hours. It might be difficult to show the same performance for women where they have to lift the heavyweight by hands for full day duty. That is why it is not fair to women force at labor sites as they will be less productive than men. Many construction sites and cargo terminals are examples where a majority of men workers are observed more than women as heavy menial force is required in such places.
The conclusion to be drawn is that the advent of technologies has made it easy to work for both men and women in many professions; but, it is still challenging for women to show the same performance like men where a labor job is required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, however, if, so, still, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80983606557 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76690232114 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511475409836 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2733357161 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198511055976 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785281092953 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506524960801 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129928702318 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257406745662 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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