Directors of large organisations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees. Some people think it is necessary but others on hold that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In an organisation, there are several positions and each position has a defined salary according to their qualification and quantity of work. Of late, Some proportion of masses assert that it is justificable to give higher remuneration to senior personnel. On the contrary, others have conflicting views. This essay intends to account for both side with my prospective.
There are multifarious points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, directors have a years of experience under their belt which is beneficial for an enterprise. Moreover, some superior position jobs such as senior management and director general under the burden of hectic schedule due to having exhausted working list as compared to other employees. To demonstrate, higher positioned workforce have their responsibility to give regularly feedback and conduct meeting with stakeholders and to form strategies. Adding to it, some managers have to travel overseas for business purposes. Consequently, giving higher salary to them deserves appreciation.
Numerous points can be consider to substantiate latter view. Initially, like higher position workers, there are some other jobs such as managers and engineers who are already under the pressure of enormous work. To demonstrate, engineers have to visit working sites and also accountable to their supervisors regarding to work done. Therefore, such personnel deserve similar amount of salary package. Last but not least, different pay scale on account of a distant position sometime create the sense of discrimination among employees.
To recapitulate, both sides have their own valid grounds. According to my opinion, entrepreneur should also pay higher remuneration to hardworking employees along the senior personnel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
...iew. First and foremost, directors have a years of experience under their belt which is...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uneration to hardworking employees along the senior personnel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, as for, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70342205323 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10353748913 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1628085182 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2352941176 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156122685414 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522330254724 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353699112745 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100895042747 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228148012809 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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