Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that high level of sugar is one of the major causes of various health problems that are prevailing in the modern society. Several manufactured foods now contain higher level of sugar in order to enhance their taste. As a result of the deliciousness, people become attracted to them and make them a part of their food habit. I believe that if such products were expensive, the people will become less likely to consume them at least on a daily basis.
People eat fast foods and drinks, which contain harmful sugar and fat whenever they are spending time outside of their homes. Even some lazy people as well as students and worker who are always busy order fast foods in form of take-outs. So if fast foods and drinks become moderately costly, these people will be changing their food habits in order to save money. Furthermore, young children should be taught about the detrimental effect of unwanted nutrients (sugar and fat) on the body from an early age to divert them from sugary meals. Parents need to know how sugar can affect the body of a growing child. Currently, obesity and diabetes have become top diseases in young generation. To get a healthier new generation steps need to be taken against the manufacturers of fast foods.
Even though everyone seems to be aware of the side effects of sugary foods on their body, the sale of sodas and other soft drinks have skyrocketed in the past five years. The only reason behind is that the products have become cheaper due to their demand. So, the government should persuade the manufacturers to begin to look for an alternative to sugar. Green vegetables and fruits need to cheaper to promote healthy diet.
To conclude, changing one's habit is very difficult, specially if its their food habit. But with proper persuasion it might be possible. In this case, it can be higher price of products that will deter the customers away.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, at least, even so, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78247734139 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44368860265 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577039274924 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8011216309 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279206631977 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784830222276 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527990138723 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15962131452 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635159090841 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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