Everyone should attend higher education for the sake of their bright future. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Whether or not people should enroll in a college for the sake of their bright future is still up for debate. While some people claim that working early without university degree is more beneficial, I entirely disagree with this conviction.
College plays a crucial role in finding and promoting students’ future jobs. Over the duration of higher education, you can gain advanced knowledge and essential skills that needs to be equipped with before applying for chosen field and the opportunities to have more experiences when becoming an intern at some companies. Therefore, it is easier for students to get a decent career in the future.
Also, the most common way to a good career is earning a university degree. Although there are some people who cannot decide what to do in the future when they attend college, they are still aware that having a degree means they can have a well-paid job. Thus, college qualification can pave the way for job opportunity.
In contrast, some people claim that university is not the only way to success and go straight to work without a college degree can have more time to experience. However, university is the shortest way which leads you to success and jobs that do not require knowledge will be replaced by artificial intelligence soon. As a result, we cannot deny the indispensable role of university.
To sum up, higher education benefits us as well as our career a lot. For this reason, attending college is a sole factor to have a bright future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not people should enroll in a college for t...
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Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...quipped with before applying for chosen field and the opportunities to have more expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in contrast, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87843137255 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71264854523 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2084514907 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6923076923 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216114263101 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702949632167 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740642268567 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120795540894 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608787646361 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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