The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The three pie charts illustrate data about daily meals from breakfast to dinner with snacks average amount of nutrients which not fruitful for if it exceeds the limit.

Overall, dinner has significant amount of each component of chemical instead of added sugar, while breakfast contain the least proportion of nutrients. Snacks have small proportion Sodium and Saturated fat inside however sugar with large proportion.

The graphs show that Sodium is primary ingredients in dinner with 43% and lunch has 29% of sodium. However, Breakfast and snacks have equal quantity of sodium 14%. Dinner has one third proportion of Saturated fat. Lunch has 26% fat although it decrease in comparison of sodium. Breakfast and snacks have 16% and 21% of Saturated fat proportion respectively. Snacks have most amount of added Sugar 42% which more than others. Dinner contain 23% added sugar inside. While, other two Breakfast and Lunch have less than 20% added sugar.

To sum up this, Breakfast is more healthy than other, almost contain equal amount

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...ated fat. Lunch has 26% fat although it decrease in comparison of sodium. Breakfast and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25748502994 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43876565051 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1089798956 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0572523935511 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021331169144 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509238764352 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512943380447 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773321868689 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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