The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts compare the various reasons (Industrial, Agriculture, and Domestic) of water used in the several continents of the world.
Overall, as can be seen, South America, Africa, and Asia continents are utilizing the largest portion of the water just for agriculture purposes rather than Industrial or domestic. While, the Rest of the two continents, North America and Europe uses their greatest portion of water in the industrial sector as compared to agriculture and domestic.
More specifically, Asian and African people spend over eight-tenth of the water for harvesting crops, while South America needs around seven-tenth of water for the same purpose. Moreover, the rest of the resource goes for the industrial and domestic sector, in Africa 9% and 7% respectively, For Central Asia (5% and 7%), while Southeast Asia stands for 12% and 7% respectively.
On the contrary, Europe and North America devote their most of the water resource solely for Industrial purposes 53% and 48% respectively. whereas, in North America, 13% is consumed by domestic and exact threefold asks for farming. In the contrast, Europe spends 15% on domestic and more than double needs for cultivating crops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33157894737 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83805266623 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7829359214 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.625 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209368010538 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994889455217 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045083986217 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140295671455 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316711760097 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.