Some people believe that money is the major source of happiness. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that some think that money is the main source to be happy. This essay agrees with this statement because we need money to survive and without it would be impossible to acquire elemental things we need in our daily life.
To begin with, having a great capital is important as economy is expensive up-to-date. Many people need to get medicines and medical services which are not inexpensive and mostly of them cannot afford to pay that. Besides, in poor countries the lack of savings is well known because salaries are not as high as in rich nations. Recent research concluded that poor people might tend to struggle. Some do not have the opportunity to buy clothes, food, shelter and many other necessities in life. Therefore, the context in which a person lives is large part of their happiness.
Secondly, money help us to get some freedom or independence. This is particularly the opportunity to make the most of our skills and talents, the ability to choose our own course in life, financial security and much more, which of course bring a smile and happiness to our and our family lives. Moreover, a research has shown that spending money on others makes us happier than spending money on ourselves and doing small acts of kindness increases life satisfaction.
In conclusion, there are people who consider that having finances is the ultimate source of happiness because money is quite significant to stand and not having it we cannot solve our basic needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cent research concluded that poor people might tend to struggle. Some do not have...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... to our and our family lives. Moreover, a research has shown that spending money on others...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58070986912 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9626928741 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202217864327 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702922205997 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600527048628 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119120622824 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270296689652 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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