In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one is better?
Transports system are changing day by day so that the demand of using vehicles of people also change. In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. These changing will have some cause that I will mention below
It is certain that, in some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. There are some reason that why people like to use car than bicycle. Firstly, it can be because of living standards. People lived in a higher living standard usually like to buy expensive car, it is not only a transport to stranfer but also is a face of people. They want to show off their weath for everyone to see. Secondly, people think that, using car will save time than using bicycle, they can go somewhere with just a minute. Lastly, in some places, the price of cars lower than others countries. People can easily buy them and use as the main vehicle.
On the contrary, in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. Using bicycle become the taste of many people with these reason. The first reason is bicycle cheaper than car, people will buy it easily with low price without fearing do not have enough money to buy. The second reason is using bicycle can reduce air pollution, limiting pollutant emissions from vehicles, so that the city will have fresh air for everyone. The third reason is use bicycle instead of using car can help people improve mental heath. Indeed, the researchers pointed out that people often cycle will help them prevent the formation of tumors, cure tumors, cardiovascular diseases, help toning muscles and lose weight. Cycling need to expand in some countries, so that people can enjoy the freedome feeling of cycling.
There are some reason that, in some places people like to use car, others places like to use bicycle. But by using bicycle, it can help us make a good habit to improve ours heath, moreover, it can protect environment. I hope that ours goverment will encourage popurlation to use bicycle more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However in some other cities, bicycles are repl...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'transport'.
Suggestion: transport
...ke to buy expensive car, it is not only a transport to stranfer but also is a face of peopl...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... city will have fresh air for everyone. The third reason is use bicycle instead of ...
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Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to tone' or 'tone'.
Suggestion: to tone; tone
...e tumors, cardiovascular diseases, help toning muscles and lose weight. Cycling need t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8223495702 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30097913316 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495702005731 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9752873456 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1428571429 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310741811059 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127090528231 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131220843964 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229432934219 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790923762784 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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