Many people enjoy travelling and experiencing other cultures. What are some of the beneficial effects of international travel on an individual?
Today, international travel is the largest industry in the world. People have different views on the impact of international travel. Although some people think that traveling abroad can lead to some troubles, I believe it gives us more benefits.
Firstly, travelling abroad helps you learn more about different cultures around the world. You learn a lot about a new way of life, a new culture while traveling. The cultural benefits of traveling are endless. No matter where you travel, you are bound to experience something new. Being aware of cultural values and norms is not only fascinating, but it can also help us understand international issues and conflicts, or even relate to the cultural norms of a foreign business partner. outside. It's an important skill to be able to change perspective and see where others are coming from.
Secondly, international tourism helps you make more relationships. Meeting people and making friends while abroad is both a necessity and one of the most enjoyable aspects of the experience. Traveling to new cultures is a great way to expand your real-life social network and meet people you never knew existed. Meeting people from all over the world gives you the opportunity to continue your relationship with people and thus continue to grow even after your travel.
Finally, traveling overseas gives you unforgettable moments and experiences. Our memories are part of who we are. As you get older and look back on your life and all that you've been through while traveling, you'll realize how much you've accomplished and your life wasn't in vain. These cherished memories are precious stories you can tell your children and grandchildren one day. And those memories will be as vivid for them as they are for you.
In conclusion, for the above reasons, I really believe that the benefits of traveling abroad bring us indisputable benefits. I hope that everyone can travel abroad at least once to experience its benefits for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10461538462 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79161890212 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9603161609 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.95 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25552408719 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903710594016 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697231504687 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155633418774 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930653340509 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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