Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
It is often argued that high wage can substitute for job satisfaction. However, I completely disagree with this statement due to various reasons which will be explained further.
First of all, welfare of the family depends on well-being of family head. In other words, if head of the household do not have job satisfaction, he will not receive a sense of fulfillment which can lead to depression and anxiety. Consequently, this state of deep dejection can cause numerous problems in families. For instance, research conducted by teachers of Alabama university shows that there is strong correlation between job satisfaction and happy family.
Secondly, doing what gives people like, keeps them motivated and leads to a career growth. In fact, there is no prosperous company without determined leaders, so those entrepreneurs who go after their goals have burning desire to achieve their aim by seeking excitement, without thinking about salary, thus they go up career ladder without any effort. For instance, Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg and Jeff Bezos highly enjoyed working and loved their job, therefore they are millionaires now.
Thirdly, money cannot buy happiness and it is more pleasant to pursue what individuals interested in. I cannot deny the fact that money essential for survival but still it cannot buy everything. For instance, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday job despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer he understood that in order to be happy we need do what we like instead of being gold digger.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that job satisfaction are highly important than high salary because it motivates and helps people be in the state of nirvana which serves as a magic tool that provides peace at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13240418118 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76064193204 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672473867596 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4538456477 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.307692308 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3076923077 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131286868881 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412163306229 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441109523694 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746915875796 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502866047361 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.