The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram illustrates how plastic bottles are recycled. Overall, there are nine stages in the process of recycling, starting with collecting the bottles in the bins and finishing with manufacturing the products.
Initially, the unused bottles put in the dustbins are collected by trucks or lorries, ready for transport to the recycling center. In the third stage, bottles are sorted whether or not whether recycle before impressing into the blocks. Then, these blocks are passed through the rotating machine to crush. As a result, they turn into plastic pieces that wash in water.
After washing clean in the tank, the output is turned to the plastic pellets by the special machine. Under heating, these pellets are formed into raw materials. Finally, these basic substances are packaged and delivered to the factory to produce some items such as bottles, T-shirts, pens, or bags. After using, people throw the product into the dustbins, and a new process begins.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... In the third stage, bottles are sorted whether or not whether recycle before impressing into ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, third, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21794871795 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48195327206 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7940823222 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246311059571 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851392181615 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837699080746 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156718751184 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743078497582 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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