Proffessor shows on TV show
The lecturer completely refutes the reading.
while the reading claims that professor being on television would be of a great benefit to the professor as it will add to his reputation as a scholar which will help him to get funds for his research, the lecturer challenges this by mentioning that his colleagues won’t take him seriously, so he won’t get invited to important academic meetings accordingly he won’t get a fund to his research.
Also, the lecturer claims that it’s not so beneficial to audience to have a professor on a TV show since they only care about entertainment not in-depth intellectual substance, and this would just need a Tv reporter to give superficial information about the academic title in question. So, the idea of audience getting a taste of real expertise in not well founded
Lastly, while the reading claims it will help the university in getting more donations and possible future students applications, the lecturer mentions that it doesn’t help the university to have a professor who is busy with preparing and traveling for a TV show instead of interacting with students and doing researches. so, the claim about benefits to the university is not valid.
In conclusion, the lecturer believes that it doesn’t make a huge impact on neither to professor nor to the university to appear on the TV and talk to audience as an academic expert.
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| 2021-11-15 | Alia Mahbob | 76 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...turer completely refutes the reading. while the reading claims that professor being...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...busy with preparing and traveling for T.V show instead of interacting with studen...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ing with students and doing researches. so, the claim about benefits to the univer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, lastly, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 230.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02608695652 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92510158485 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526086956522 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 21.2450331126 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.005459667 49.2860985944 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.666666667 110.228320801 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.3333333333 21.698381199 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103718557369 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051217322686 0.0996497079465 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663339835945 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557059443151 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580667708951 0.0443174109184 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.3589403974 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.0289183223 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.498013245 164% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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