The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart illustrates what Anthropology students of a university do after graduation while the table shows their income five years later.

Obviously, after graduating, most students are employed in a full-time job, and a lesser amount of them either do part-time jobs or study postgraduate or unemployed. Overall, in five years, Anthropology students do mainly three categories of career: freelance consultants, government sector, and private companies.

Regarding the pie chart, it is clear that half of the graduated students have a full-time job, and a small amount of them also study postgraduate (about 8%). Nearly a fifth of students employed in a part-time job, and there is a small number of 5% of students study postgraduate while doing part-time jobs. Unemployed students and unknown are accounted for 12% and 8% of the pie chart respectively.

Looking at the table, in the wage range between $25.000 to $49.999 and $50.000 to $74.999, students who have private companies make up the majority, 10% and 35%, respectively. Meanwhile, both other two types of employment cover 5% and 15% sequentially. The majority of freelance consultants, about 40%, have the salary range of $75.000 - $99.999, as many as consultants who have more than $100.000 income. Private companies' employer's salary has the lowest percentage among these two ranges, accounting for 25% and 30%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ployed in a part-time job, and there is a small number of 5% of students study postgraduate while...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...the table, in the wage range between 25.000$ to 49.999$ and 50,000$ to 74,999$, stud...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
Suggestion: $999
...in the wage range between 25.000$ to 49.999$ and 50,000$ to 74,999$, students who ha...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...range between 25.000$ to 49.999$ and 50,000$ to 74,999$, students who have private c...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
Suggestion: $999
...en 25.000$ to 49.999$ and 50,000$ to 74,999$, students who have private companies ma...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
... about 40%, have the salary range of 75.000$ - 99.999$, as many as consultants who h...
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Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
Suggestion: $999
..., have the salary range of 75.000$ - 99.999$, as many as consultants who have more t...
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Line 7, column 393, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...y as consultants who have more than 100.000$ income. Private companies employers sal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34403669725 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01490912454 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591743119266 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6848496819 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120482643489 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584871517479 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109206115095 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122235611309 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150706615067 0.0819641961636 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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