The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The pictures of two maps provided illustrate the environment of an island that was before tourist facilities' development and after the event. In general, the island has changed significantly from the past and has got number of infrastructures and recreational facilities developed for the tourism.
Specifically, there were only a few trees and no considerable place for habitant before the construction. It was just consisted of water around it and a small beach. But, after the tourism facilities was installed, the road ways and accommodations are augmented by a huge number. Moreover, restaurants, reception hall and even a swimming facility near the beach has been added. Apparently, boats or ships are available as a mode of transport for reaching the island.
In a interesting view, even though the places to enjoy are developed in a large scale conspicuously, it seems that the number of trees have not decreased. Furthermore, it is surprising to see that the vehicle tracks have not expanded to the whole island and is limited to only the restaurant and reception area. The path to beach and other accommodations is still by foot.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'facilities'' or 'facility's'?
Suggestion: facilities'; facility's
...nt of an island that was before tourist facilities development and after the event. In gen...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... transport for reaching the island. In a interesting view, even though the place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, if, moreover, still, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15053763441 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19391040995 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7037813123 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130445667885 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488415144179 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071248093811 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943762836326 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768967693034 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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