Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should provide universal healthcare. Give reasons and details to support your answer.
When it comes to Healthcare, people often tend to compare it with “Food for all” as having a universal and good healthcare system is as important as having food for all. During these times of pandemic, it is pivotal to note that healthcare played a crucial role in mitigating the impact of such epidemics. A good healthcare system is not just about being able to provide quality services, but also one that is available and accessible to everybody. And when it comes to providing services for the entire nation, it cannot be denied that it is the government’s duty to ensure a system that is accessible for every citizen, whether poor or rich.
The government has an obligation to provide services like food, health, defense, and many more to the country’s people. It has the resources and power to serve the entire nation. The government can bring in policies that ensure universal healthcare that includes the private sector as well. They have the power to cap on the private sector so that they don’t charge hefty prices on health services. It is true that many times private health care systems tend to attract more when it comes to quality, but it is also important to note the price that one has to pay in order to get those quality services.
The poor on the other hand are often excluded and it is the government’s duty to make sure that there is a universal healthcare system. A combination of the public and private sectors under government policies could be a key solution for having an omnipresent healthcare system. The rich or the upper-class people of society can access the private services and the poor or lower class on the other hand can access public services.
In conclusion, it is the duty of the country’s policymakers to have a universal healthcare system. The government in a way is obliged towards providing services that are accessible for the entire population. The country’s bureaucrats are answerable to questions like “Who is accountable for providing health and food for all, and ensuring a just society?”. The effect Covid-19 had on the world is something where factors like “Universal Healthcare” played a major role. The government has to understand the need for building a system that is universal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...for all, and ensuring a just society?”. The effect Covid-19 had on the world is som...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...versal Healthcare” played a major role. The government has to understand the need f...
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Line 7, column 554, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or building a system that is universal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, as to, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94240837696 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84163479322 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437172774869 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7515741254 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.058823529 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137148155855 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552952507604 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037292187976 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948799947941 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265704756735 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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