The most essential component of a person’s life is his or her time at working place, and life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
In this fast-paced era, people tend to spare so much time on work that some opinions conceive it as being the most initial part of our lives. This viewpoint even argues that one life is worthless if its owner does not achieve any triumph in career path. This essay will throw some light on notions of this concept and explain why this perspective is mistaken.
To commence with, there is one main rationale for those who believe job satisfaction is the most essential component of a human's life. It is easy to see from the current society that success in occupation not only benefits our financial aspects but also affirms our social status. As a result, life turns easier for those who are high achievers on the career ladder. In contrast, people with jobs frustration such as being dismissed or bankruptcy might find their life meaningless after a diligent period.
However, I side with those who dispute the accuracy of this statement. In my perspective, life is a set of different goals, and a job successful outcome is just a part of these infinite values. Besides achievement in working, people can find the real treasure trove of happiness through other aspects of life such as family, friendship, self-love, knowledge, etc. Even though a man is not as well at his company as others, he still recognised his life as valuable by being a good father, a great husband, and a generous neighbor.
Moreover, we should not lose sight of job satisfaction pursuit's drawbacks. In fact, many articles have reported that successful businessmen and high achievers are still looking for their lives meaning. While they gain what ordinary people always dream of, they are in a desperate situation of being stressed, depressed and lonely. These states of mind cannot easily conquer by the amount of money or the high social position that they obtain. Hence, reaching job goals does not mean your life is full of meaning.
By and large, I reckon that people's lives are precious in different aspects. Regardless of how successful a person is, true happiness is the most valuable ambition that we should pursue. Till the end, only we can judge our life whether it is meaningful or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, while, i reckon, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87634408602 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58805499822 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594086021505 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0645828919 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4736842105 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214657030636 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589333974196 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519023135408 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107129517236 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440153848116 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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