Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying in today’s progressive world where we live, most of the company are looking forward to attract more consumers. In this regard, they have cooperated with commercials company to produce compelling advertisement. It has a debate among psychologist that, creation of the adevertisment to display beneficial of product more than real advantages is the good way. I hold the view that, exaggeration of advertisement, has some disadvantages. The reasons to support my idea are illustrated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is no secret to anyone that, commercial can effect directly on the market. Although, the consumers usually rely on the advertisement, but sometimes companies abuse this trust and make the advertisement more than reality. For instance, I bought a wash dishes last year which had a huge advertisement in bilbord whole the city. They mentioned it, it is very cleaner washes. Unfortnately, after taking the machine in our house, we realized that, it washed the dishes clearly but it took several hours. This, make us to use more electricity that we start a trouble with it. As a result, if commercial do not attempt consuming market with a exaggeration, we did not provide that machine with innumerable energy consumption.
Furthermore, in the inappropriate way, which company choose to promote the products, consumers in with different age range will attract to buy the each stock with is useless for them.For example, last month the television show a fantastic commercial about the sport show which you can go with everywhere. Therefore, I had decided to order it for my grandfather and myself. Undeniabely it was a high quality shows which I had run, while it had disadvantages for my grand pa. The shows was heavy more than usual so it was not good enough for old people to walk on it. Consequentely, If the company make it clear that, the product is not beneficial for all age, my grandpa did not waste his money.
In conclusion,having considered the above-mentioned reasons into account, I have belived that, the companies should make the commercial based on the real, in order not to lose the trust of the consumers and help them to select the adequate product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to attracting'.
Suggestion: to attracting
...most of the company are looking forward to attract more consumers. In this regard, they ha...
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Line 2, column 652, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...al do not attempt consuming market with a exaggeration, we did not provide that m...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...the each stock with is useless for them.For example, last month the television show...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'show'?
Suggestion: show
...self. Undeniabely it was a high quality shows which I had run, while it had disadvant...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...isadvantages for my grand pa. The shows was heavy more than usual so it was not goo...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , having
... did not waste his money. In conclusion,having considered the above-mentioned reasons ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04891304348 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.106718739 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567934782609 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.463223748 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151748651183 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482820051008 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374316452946 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913990697284 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293074099228 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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