Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Today the traffic and pollution from vehicles has become an issue of major concern. Some people believe that by increasing cost of petrol, we can control the growing traffic and pollution while others say it is not the best solution to it. I would discuss both these views and give my viewpoint on this.
To begin with, definitely if the petrol will become too expensive, less people will be able to afford it. More people will start preferring public transport that will suit to their budget more. This will lead to decrease in number of cars on the roads. Many would think before they take the c...
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