Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages
Even though the work hours are limited through regulations on employees benift considering the most of aspects, many people work for extra hours while sacrificing limited time for leisure activities. I strongly believe that, working long hours will generate more disadvantages to their lives.
All human being struggling from morning to night is to achieve single goal, which is satisfaction. As an employee, work life balance is more important to be a highly satisfied successful human being. Therefore, engaging family and friends is more important to balance the life rather burning all guel for the work. In addition, engaging in too much time creates stress on mind and impact on health system considerably. Diabetic and high blood pressure are more common diseases come with the long term stress. Further, leisure time is more important to have a good life, which creates friendly environment on mind and physical health which move forward for high satisfaction.
However, with the competition and the economic crises, job comes to the first place to win the rase. Therefor, people involved more time with work to earn more money through extra hours and have a good relation with the management to get other benefits. People never feel on satisfaction without the good financial background due to the current economic situations as every on on etruggling with day to day cost management. Therefore, there are some short term advantage on working long hours.
Considering all above, to have a long term benefits and good life, I believe that, long term working hours are not provide considerable advantages to the life. However, with the current context, carefully managed working hours is more vital.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the aspects') or simply say ''most aspects''.
Suggestion: most of the aspects; most aspects
...ons on employees benift considering the most of aspects, many people work for extra hours while...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...es, job comes to the first place to win the rase. Therefor, people involved more time wi...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: on
...he current economic situations as every on on etruggling with day to day cost managem...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...e that, long term working hours are not provide considerable advantages to the life. Ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22545454545 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68287252002 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4344127265 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352033750579 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11960957563 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763782769382 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225362734102 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673740063409 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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