the table below describes victims by age group and offence category in Venezuela, 1999.
The table shows the statistics about people in five different age groups who became victims of various crimes in Venezuela in 1999. It can be clearly seen that robbery was the most common type of offence in all of the age groups.
The highest number of victims belongs to robbery at 4558 over 15 and under 24 years old. These numbers decline to 220 as the age groups increase up to over 65 years old. However, the highest total number of victims was in robbery category at 9860, the lowest one was in the negligence category at 54. There were not any victims belonged to age group of 0-14 in the negligence category. Figures of blackmail and murder victims are very similar tendency to rise as the age groups grow from 0-14 to25-44, where they peak at 76 and 38 respectively. Another noticeable feature in the kidnapping is that most of victims belonged to age group of 0-14 at 110.
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Figures of blackmail and murder victims are very similar tendency
Figures of blackmail and murder victims have very similar tendency
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