Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about the effectiveness of working from home compared to working in an office. While being in offices might have some benefits for the employers, in my opinion, the positive effects resulting from home working are far more significant.
Working from home benefits the workers in several ways. First of all, they do not have to face the traffic congestion, which consume much of their time during rush hours. For instance, some big cities such as Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh, people have to suffer from this problems at least twice on a daily basis and often get stuck for one or two hours. Moreover, it is claimed that working at home is the best option for parents who often complain that they do not have enough time for their families when working at the office. Working from home give people flexibility to balance their working life as well as their social life.
On the other hand, it is argued that people who working from home often feel a sense of being isolated and less likely to ladden their career. In the office, workers may do their work efficiently since they are able to work as a team with other colleagues. Therefore, they can sharpen their teamwork skills and expand their social network. As a result, they may find more chances to get up their carreer rather than working alone in home. Besides that, some workers at home admit that they are easily get distracted by the temptation in home environment such as turning on the television, wasting their time on the Internet or other relax acitivities. This could lead to the consequence of inefficient working.
In conclusion, although working from home can give people more opportunities to share family works and enjoying your lifetime, the disadvantages could not be ignored. Therefore, people have to avoid their temptation in home environment and spend time wisely to interact with their colleagues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...Ho Chi Minh, people have to suffer from this problems at least twice on a daily basi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 965.302439024 166% => OK
No of words: 328.0 196.424390244 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87195121951 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49412605593 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 106.607317073 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 283.868780488 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3633742025 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1333333333 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303699058698 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129516790422 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099180267674 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223125847684 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323319767842 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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