Some people choose to eat no meat or fish.They belive that this is not only for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole
Nowadays people has many preference of food, no mater is it meat, fish, and vegetables. But, Person who find vegetarianism did not eat food which is contain animal like meat, poultry, and fish, they argue that only eat vegetables enough to take care health.
Some people argue that meat, poultry, fish and some kind of food which is contain animal protein able to trigger high blood pressure, cholesterol, and over fat. They believe being a vegetarian is good way to solve many health problem caused animal protein. Furthermore, vegetable person considered what kind of oil that they use for cooking, they did not compare animal product with vegetables.
This views believe that being vegetarian can give benefits to the world, be a vegetarian is mean protect the earth. Guard the world from potential extinction animal, and reduce exploitation animal including fish. On the other hand, others people that are not a vegetarian eat meat and fish every day. It means be a vegetarian is not can be guaranty for others people not exploit animal, because majority people are not vegetarian and they certainly need to eat meat and fish every day, they need to sufficient intake of daily protein. Furthermore, human need to consume animal protein and also fibrous food, its mean just eat vegetable is not a good choice. How can people to complete daily nutrition with only eat vegetables, humans need many kind of nutrition for being healty, and human also need enough energy for daily activity. Our body produce energy from food that we consume every day, minus one of body needs can make human be sluggish to do some daily activities.
In my views, be a vegetarian is not a smart choice. Because human need to complete daily nutrition, and its mean we should eat enough vegetable and also animal product.
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| 2021-12-14 | Adam Diedo | 61 | view |
| 2021-12-14 | Adam Diedo | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun preference seems to be countable; consider using: 'many preferences'.
Suggestion: many preferences
Nowadays people has many preference of food, no mater is it meat, fish, and...
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Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...vegetarianism did not eat food which is contain animal like meat, poultry, and fish, th...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...ry, fish and some kind of food which is contain animal protein able to trigger high blo...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...being a vegetarian is good way to solve many health problem caused animal protein. Furtherm...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... protect the earth. Guard the world from potential extinction animal, and reduce ...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and also fibrous food, its mean just eat vegetable is not a good choice. How can ...
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Line 3, column 741, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...n with only eat vegetables, humans need many kind of nutrition for being healty, and huma...
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Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egetarian is not a smart choice. Because human need to complete daily nutrition, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91803278689 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47176150648 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47868852459 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5753203429 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270265609454 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102234942686 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056990584948 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168655801206 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735202947999 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.