It is said: “There are times, when it has passed, to realize that it is forever engraved in the memory”. The same is true of student love: simple, beautiful, and full of memories. So, Are college love moment all the best? While advocates argue that it is plausible, others suggest otherwise. Personally looking, I partly agree with this standpoint that students should have a college relationship.
First and foremost, the main reason causing me support is the romance and beauty of Young love. As YOU can see, the student relationship is very simple, they don't care about each other's status or achievements. Just being together and going through a lot of beautiful memories together. All of that creates so many wonderful and memorable moments as a student.
It does not stop there, the next reason is more maturity in each student. For instance, when two people are in love, they have to be tolerant of other mistakes and responsible for maintaining their love. In addition, they learn to balance time for school, work, family, and time with their lover. Even a poor student can work harder to study better to pursue the person he likes. That not only proves maturity but also forge good experiences for them later in life.
As two sides of a coin, some people might think that while in school, they should not fall in love because it easily distracts them from studying. However, not all relationships are not good, affecting study or work. If students have a beautiful love affair in college, it will make life more colorful and wonderful. A love relationship, though not beautiful, will also give us experiences. Therefore, before deciding to enter into a relationship with someone, YOU should think and observe carefully so as not to choose the wrong person.
As discussed throughout this essay, college love is not only romantic and beautiful but also helps us to become more mature. Therefore, every student should have at least one love while still in school. It will create beautiful moments, beautiful experiences so that later we have good memories to remember.
It is said: “There are times, when it has passed, to realize that it is forever engraved in the memory”. The same is true of student love: simple, beautiful, and full of memories. So, Are college love moment all the best? While advocates argue that it is plausible, others suggest otherwise. Personally looking, I partly agree with this standpoint that students should have a college relationship.
First and foremost, the main reason causing me support is the romance and beauty of Young love. As YOU can see, the student relationship is very simple, they don't care about each other's status or achievements. Just being together and going through a lot of beautiful memories together. All of that creates so many wonderful and memorable moments as a student.
It does not stop there, the next reason is more maturity in each student. For instance, when two people are in love, they have to be tolerant of other mistakes and responsible for maintaining their love. In addition, they learn to balance time for school, work, family, and time with their lover. Even a poor student can work harder to study better to pursue the person he likes. That not only proves maturity but also forge good experiences for them later in life.
As two sides of a coin, some people might think that while in school, they should not fall in love because it easily distracts them from studying. However, not all relationships are not good, affecting study or work. If students have a beautiful love affair in college, it will make life more colorful and wonderful. A love relationship, though not beautiful, will also give us experiences. Therefore, before deciding to enter into a relationship with someone, YOU should think and observe carefully so as not to choose the wrong person.
As discussed throughout this essay, college love is not only romantic and beautiful but also helps us to become more mature. Therefore, every student should have at least one love while still in school. It will create beautiful moments, beautiful experiences so that later we have good memories to remember.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, at least, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97714285714 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.619742938 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0997767636 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368444894316 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108105760587 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948746671059 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222577104468 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148212916078 0.056905535591 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.