You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagrams illustrate the life cycle of the silkworm and each period in the production of silk cloth.
Overall, the life cycle of the silkworm lasts about 2 months from laying eggs to turning into a moth. The production of silk cloth contains 6 simple steps.
In the first stage, the silkworm begins to lay eggs, and after 10 days, the eggs will transform into the silkworm larva. They consume the mulberry leaf as the major food to grow up. Around 4 to 6 weeks later, a layer of silk threat covers its whole body except the head of the larva. The larva continues to generate silk threat which covers its whole body after 3-8 days to become a cocoon. 16 days later, the silk thread outside disappears, turning the cocoon into the moth. The life cycle starts to happen again.
To produce silk cloth, people choose some of the best silk threads of the cocoon to manufacture silk cloth. Then, they boil them in water and unwind them. Each cocoon will be stretched into threads whose length is about 300 to 900 meters. They twist the thread and then dye them with various colors. The final step is weaving those threads into a complete cloth to produce clothes for customers.
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- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience important for 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61611374408 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09968118563 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549763033175 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3788639362 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5714285714 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18252795556 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718332484133 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742854321361 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157203134783 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811284784074 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.