Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays people feel that the way employees dress to work does not really matter and that employers should focus more on the content of their work. While I agree that quality of work is crucial, I believe that proper dress code is also vital.
One of the reasons why the quality of workers is very important is that the success of businesses and firms depend on it. Qualities such as knowledge, skills and experience in any job ensures consumer satisfaction. When consumers are happy with the quality of services, they improve the ratings of the firm. For example, companies like Apple and Google employ the best graduates in various fields. This enables them to produce the best phones and software, hence, becoming market leaders.
However, what people wear to their work places in any profession is also important. Dressing in official clothes makes a customer more comfortable with the service provider. For example, a medical doctor is expected to be in a white coat. Dressing inappropriately might make patients uncomfortable and withhold vital information. Dressing well also gives employees a sense of seriousness when going to work. If employees wear casual clothes like jeans and flip-flops to work, they might not take their jobs more seriously. This would probably be because, there would be no difference between home clothes and work clothes.
In conclusion, I believe that the qualities an employee provides for a firm is as significant as the way they appear in their workplaces.
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The government s investment in arts music and theatre is a waste of money Governments should invest these funds in public services instead To what extent do you agree with this statement 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, really, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11788617886 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72135876157 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.453412057 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.9333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281638084008 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839682296603 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904662752648 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177493053542 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103158137007 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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