Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Learning a new language in the country that speaks the language is the best way to learn.
When people are interested in a new speech to acquire knowledge, the more acceptable way is in the native language. I Agree that this statement is an effective way to learn. I think this way for two reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First, Learning a second language is a great way to experience boost confidence and increase employability. Living in a native country allows talking with more native speakers and contributes to building learning skills to speak and listen. Consequently, it may help somebody in need. For instance, as a personal experience, visiting the United States while walking on the street. A sixty-six-year-old lady did not know how to get to the hospital, and she asked for help. As a result, I needed to explain how to get to the right place and practice the learning language skills I had learned to communicate and guide her to her desired place.
Second, English is a valuable and compelling language to know, making learning easier if spent in the USA. As the most spoken language globally, English enables communication in virtually any place. For instance, while visiting the United States, I met a Charter Company director. Therefore, we exchanged conversations about better job opportunities due to English knowledge acquired in the United States. As a result, he offered a job interview and a new employment position that I did not expect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elp somebody in need. For instance, as a personal experience, visiting the United...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00862068966 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03409088379 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590517241379 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8856515131 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276943932866 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844682000681 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888695868155 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167515295621 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457224830545 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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