Nowadays, people have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle. Why do think this is? How could this problem be solved?
This is a fact that a good heath is the wealth for a person. It is provided that nowadays people are becoming victims of numerous diseases and getting many heath disorders. While i believe that there are several reasons behind this trend, many effective measures can be applied for eliminating this problem.
On the one hand, the phenomenon of pursuing unhealthy lifestyles has plenty of causes. First of all, in these days everyone, especially, youngsters are under the great influence of technical advancements as they always sit in front of computer screen or browse the internet. Therefore, due to have sedentary lifestyle which results in over weight in early age. Secondly, in the modern age, people prefer to eat in restaurants rather than preparing healthy snd appetizing cuisines in the kitchen at hone. Moreover, kids rely more on packed and junk food items that leads to obesity among them in young age. Finally, smoking is extremely detrimental of a fit and fine body as it might cause many incurable ailments such as cancer. So, it does not have negative impacts on individuals but society as a whole.
On the other hand, many solutions can be used for promoting physical and mental health of community. First of all, teenagers should be encouraged to do physical and outdoor activities rather than indoor ones as jogging, running and walking assist in developing a flexible body as well as control the weight of the body. As a consequent, it would bring activeness and enhance cognitive power by venting out stress. Secondly, humans should take a balanced and nutritious diet as healthy meals comprise all minerals and carbohydrates which helps in building a better physique. That is why, awareness must be created among people to go for physical activities and cooking home made dishes.
To conclude, although i think that there are reasons for the phenomenon of unhealthy habits to individuals, with the aid of useful measures these issues can be sorted out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, i think, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0487804878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70498141393 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3821435719 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186907183392 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519233705642 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495051839616 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106716555416 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574031648328 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.