Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity, However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects,
Shopping is enjoyed among all the age groups and among all the societies. People like to do shopping mostly in free time. In this essay, we will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of shopping.
Nowadays, there are different attractive options for shopping, there are shopping malls which is a shopping centre for each and everything. Whenever people have free time, they go for shopping in malls as they can shop for long hours under one roof and then they have options to eat and drink at the same time. Hence, people prefer this option for shopping rather than retail shopping.In current covid situation, people are more inclined towards online shopping, as all the shopping centres were closed in the cities. This was the only option available for everyone then, and it was more acceptable by many. Not only it saved time, but also people had varied options to choose from, also they had the choice return the product if they dislike it and get refund on it.The main benefit of shopping is you can purchase daily necessities from the shops, also it de-stresses your mind as the person gets diverted from their daily routines, also people can gift to their loved ones whatever they wish.
The dis-advantage is that people especially from children age group get fascinated by the advertisements shown on Television, they wish to shop each and everything even if its not needed. This results in waste of money. Also people get attracted towards special offers and discounts offered by advertising the product.
In my opinion, shopping should be considered as fun activity and should shop essential products, also sometimes products that are fascinating but are useful in a certain way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06382978723 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86795041458 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.8531436588 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176944861419 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743491000435 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385910611414 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102479632794 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247258758795 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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