Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Nowadays, it is true that the increase of the sport area is an effective way to improve public health, while others who think that it does not make sense and does have the right impact. In this essay I will discuss both views and summarise the main points in the end.
On the other hand, augmenting the sport facilities in each environment has gotten good impact for community particularly they have not been extensive land. For example, in small cities, there are lack of places for sports activities. Additionally, they are certain that rising place of exercise encourage people ardents to do sports. Moreover, many homeowners do not have free space for physical activities in their houses. Area's sport outdoors make them interesting to improve health by sport.
However, increasing the amount of sport facilities is not forever suitable with all of the way of health but depends on sport only. For instance, many individuals remain healthy by keeping the right diet because wrong food consumtion may cause a huge problem in the human body and remove all benefit of doing sports.
To sump up, well-being people could be worsened by our habits and building more sports facilities could get affect much in our society. In addition, I think the wellness of society could be preserved by other productive and take advantage for increasing sport area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98230088496 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55346157737 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7727012987 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.363636364 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254210200546 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921167012329 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836481453997 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148897562751 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618597389469 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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