Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
It is believed that many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines. In this essay I completely agree that does this development bring more advantages or disadvantage.
In the one hand the advantage of the many things that use to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines is can help with human homework activities in completion time. It is because machines can work effeciently and on time and also not tired, for example in my house washing machine is very helpful can help with house chores that must be use hands. As result machine presence very needed in house chores because it cab speed up the work instead of using hands. It is important there is no doubt thats machine it's very helpful house chores in this day and age.
However, there some drewbacks of this problems. Firstly if we depend to the machine in every house chores make us very lazy in doing thw job it is due to machine can work very fast and not get tired while if humans use hands in every house chores san make them tired and them very lazy to do that work take for example base on data state of ohio exactly in Cleveland city upper and middle class houses use machine in house chores because they are lazy to do it and if the machine is broken they are just waiting for machine tobe fixed instead of doing the work themself bay hand. Secondly, every machine thre must be a time limit for use, since machine is electronic equipment and all electronic equipment have time limit For use maybe 3 years or 5 years after that they have only two option fixed or throw if they choose to fixed it will cost a lot and if they choose to throw it can be waste, for example base on data Jakarta environmental services addition of wasted increasing ecery year because the resistance of rhe machine is getting worse so they prefer to throw away than fix it.
To sump up i agree in this day and age humans more prefer to use machine rather than hands for house chores because it can make work faster instead of using hands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34554973822 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15683295623 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452879581152 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.797924285 49.4020404114 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.0 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360627807384 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201655719309 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194155693502 0.0667982634062 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325151172185 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.242663784648 0.056905535591 426% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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