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The number of traffic accidents is rising in many countries. Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the only way to reduce traffic accidents. Do you agree or disagree? 73
How much screen time is too much for kids 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ave gotten the main idea of some experts .There is no absolute correlation between...
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...e gotten the main idea of some experts .There is no absolute correlation between the ...
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... of device use and children’s well-being .We are supposed to pay more attention to...
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...f device use and children’s well-being .We are supposed to pay more attention to w...
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... attention to what children are watching ,playing and reading and ensure that the ...
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... ensure that the content is high-quality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join ...
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...s high-quality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join them as much as possible ....
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...ality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join them as much as possible . Everyt...
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... .Besides ,join them as much as possible . Everything has its two sides .Accordi...
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...ossible . Everything has its two sides .According wo Brewer’s view ,parents shou...
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...sible . Everything has its two sides .According wo Brewer’s view ,parents should join i...
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...ts two sides .According wo Brewer’s view ,parents should join in with their kids r...
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...ther than limit their media consumptions .From where I stand ,as a college student...
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...r media consumptions .From where I stand ,as a college student ,actually we prefer...
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...From where I stand ,as a college student ,actually we prefer to accept parent’s pa...
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...pation rather than be controlled by them .Digital devices exist everywhere in our ...
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... in our daily life and to a great extent ,we can’t avoid using them if we want to ...
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...t to be successful to complete something .Moreover ,It is impossible for parents t...
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...ccessful to complete something .Moreover ,It is impossible for parents to limit th...
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...it their kid’s media consumption forever .As a result ,participating and keeping e...
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...s media consumption forever .As a result ,participating and keeping exposure safe ...
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...t way to deal with the problem like this . To sum up ,Brewer’s view is brilliant...
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...n we are going to resolve contradictions .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, to sum up, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1641025641 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03879701817 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723076923077 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.161453242 49.4020404114 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.666666667 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0613310617698 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334220892709 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238636113956 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334220892709 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238636113956 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 50.2224549098 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.31 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, to sum up, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments