You want to improve your knowledge of a foreign language which can help you at work Write a letter to a foreign language teacher and say Where did you hear about the teacher Why do you want to learn a foreign language Ask some questions about the course

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ies, parents and children have launched a 'protracted war' without gunp...
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...ictions on the use of electronic devices .Based on the about of report ,I have got...
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...tions on the use of electronic devices .Based on the about of report ,I have gotten t...
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...ic devices .Based on the about of report ,I have gotten the main idea of some expe...
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...ave gotten the main idea of some experts .There is no absolute correlation between...
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...e gotten the main idea of some experts .There is no absolute correlation between the ...
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... of device use and children’s well-being .we are supposed to pay more attention to...
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... attention to what children are watching ,playing and reading and ensure that the ...
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... ensure that the content is high-quality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join ...
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...s high-quality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join them as much as possible ....
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...high-quality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join them as much as possible . ...
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...ality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join them as much as possible . ...
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... .Besides ,join them as much as possible . Everything has its two sides ...
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...des ,join them as much as possible . Everything has its two sides . it is und...
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.... Everything has its two sides . it is undeniable that this restriction ...
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... Everything has its two sides . it is undeniable that this restriction of ...
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... learning is more important than the two .According to brewer’s view ,parents shou...
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...earning is more important than the two .According to brewer’s view ,parents should join i...
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...than the two .According to brewer’s view ,parents should join in with their kids r...
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...ther than limit their media consumptions . With the participation of parents, in a...
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Suggestion: Children
...ecome self-discipline and self-control. children can also enhance their physical quality...
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... can also enhance their physical quality . digital devices exist everywhere in ...
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Suggestion: Digital
...lso enhance their physical quality . digital devices exist everywhere in our daily l...
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... in our daily life and to a great extent ,we can’t avoid using them if we want to ...
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...t to be successful to complete something .Moreover ,it is impossible for parents t...
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...to be successful to complete something .Moreover ,it is impossible for parents to limit ...
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...ccessful to complete something .Moreover ,it is impossible for parents to limit th...
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...it their kid’s media consumption forever .As a result ,participating and keeping e...
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... their kid’s media consumption forever .As a result ,participating and keeping exp...
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...s media consumption forever .As a result ,participating and keeping exposure safe ...
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...t way to deal with the problem like this . To sum up ,brewer’s view is b...
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...to deal with the problem like this . To sum up ,brewer’s view is brilliant an...
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... problem like this . To sum up ,brewer’s view is brilliant and rational ...
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...,brewer’s view is brilliant and rational ,due to the children’s rebellious psychol...
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... to the children’s rebellious psychology ,I can’t agree more that we need to respe...
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...n we are going to resolve contradictions .From where I stand ,as a college student...
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...we are going to resolve contradictions .From where I stand ,as a college student ,ac...
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...solve contradictions .From where I stand ,as a college student ,actually we prefer...
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...From where I stand ,as a college student ,actually we prefer to accept parent’s pa...
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...pation rather than be controlled by them .it is suggested that parents should adop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as a result, to sum up, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 937.175257732 182% => OK
No of words: 317.0 206.0 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38170347003 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13073670042 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 127.690721649 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605678233438 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 290.88556701 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.245827724 44.8134815571 418% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.25 76.5299724578 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.625 16.8248392259 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.875 4.34317383033 296% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 2.54639175258 1571% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0357096921349 0.216113520407 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171164050384 0.0766984524023 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00829946233343 0.0603063233224 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0236833550008 0.12726935374 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00286178667356 0.0580467560999 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 8.37731958763 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 70.7449484536 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 7.45979381443 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 8.71597938144 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 41.2886597938 220% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 8.15463917526 294% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.