More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes, and other items. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
Acquiring merchandise with famous brands attached to it has become increasingly popular among a large number of people. This essay will discuss some reasons why this trend has occurred, and my opinion is that it has tremendous benefits for society.
There are various factors that lead to the purchase of high-end goods created by reputable manufacturers. The assumption that personal possessions can reflect wealth, social status, and appearance is the primary reason for this tendency. In fact, goods from high-end enterprises are made of high-quality materials in a variety of stylish styles and are produced by highly skilled craftsmen. As a result, they not only enhance people’s appearance but also last for many years. Therefore, they are usually sold at an exorbitant price, and those who can afford them must be rich enough. Hence, owning a lavish item such as a Lamborghini can help people show off their prosperity and social standing. Moreover, famous figures have been influential arbiters of taste and public buying. Consequently, consumers are often swayed by celebrity endorsements and end up buying extravagant goods.
Obviously, this movement is beneficial to the community. As using top-ranked label product is a symbol of high living conditions, aspirational customers are likely to immerse themselves in working harder to maximize the amount of money they make. Thus, they can reward themselves with well-known brand goods and greatly improve their lifestyle. Furthermore, the tendency is likely to exert powerful pressure on large corporations to center on financing the technological advance and various aspects of the outputs. As a consequence, those companies can out-compete their counterparts and maintain a perfect image among consumers. For instance, Apple, which is one of the strongest economic superpowers, constantly promotes the functions and models of its products, resulting in the release of new upgraded smartphone versions that rake in more than 300 million per year.
In summary, the trend of consuming top brands' items largely stems from people’s perception of individual custody and the influence of famous people. This trend is considered to have advantageous effects on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in fact, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97921507188 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7876469417 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221996462726 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599720183193 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628810809695 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146425434303 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609613285847 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.